What's Tukitaka
2 min readSep 10, 2023

In a quiet town at the heart of Kenya, Linus Kiptarus was a well-known pool master. His skill with the cue ball was unmatched, and he had a reputation for being unbeatable at the local pool hall. He lived a simple life in this close-knit community, but he had dreams that extended beyond the pool table.

One day, Linus decided to visit Eldoret, a nearby town where his brother resided. There, a surprise awaited him - a pool competition with a substantial cash prize. He entered the tournament with the expectation of perhaps winning third place, which would still be a considerable achievement.

However, destiny had other plans for Linus. To his own amazement, he performed brilliantly and emerged as the unexpected winner. It was the first time he had ever won such a significant amount of money, and he couldn't contain his excitement. Linus couldn't wait to share the news with his family and friends. He promised a grand celebration, a party like no other.

As he made his way back home, though, tragedy struck. Linus fell victim to a robbery. The incident left him deeply traumatized and changed him profoundly. The constant fear and anxiety weighed heavily on his mind, pushing him into a state of depression.

Desperate for an escape from his torment, Linus turned to drugs. At first, it seemed like a temporary relief from his anguish, but it quickly became a dangerous habit. Every time he used, he would pass out, and it was only through the quick thinking of his concerned coworkers that he received first aid and survived these episodes.

Linus continued to struggle, and his once-promising life began to spiral out of control. He isolated himself from his family and friends, consumed by his addiction. The dreams of the future he once had faded into obscurity.

One fateful night, Linus was on a night shift at the company where his mother had tirelessly sought employment for him. The stress and exhaustion took their toll, and he passed out once again. This time, nobody noticed until morning, when his concerned colleague realized that something was terribly wrong.

Panicked, they rushed Linus to the hospital, but it was tragically too late. The drugs had taken their toll, and he had already passed away, leaving his family devastated and mourning the loss of a once-promising young man whose life had taken a heartbreaking turn.

The story of Linus Kiptarus serves as a stark reminder of the destructive power of addiction and how a moment of triumph can swiftly turn into tragedy, leaving behind a shattered family and a community in mourning.

What's Tukitaka
What's Tukitaka

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I write children stories andnarrative

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